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Lovely

June 4, 2010

Lovely

Your form, your grace, your beauty,
Enthrall me like no other.
Captured by your fond embrace,
I lie here, spent and sated.
Wishing only for the sight,
Of your breathy nakedness,
Writhing above me once more.

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15 Comments leave one →
  1. June 4, 2010 1:48 pm

    hot!
    sweet poem!

  2. viola permalink
    June 6, 2010 8:55 am

    I like your poems because they are short, but yet expressed very well with lines that flows nicely. Not to many people can keep their thoughts short but so much. I am one of them. LOL Congratulations on your award, and thank you for being nice enough to stop by William’s public blog to visit me and to wish my husband well.

  3. June 9, 2010 1:33 pm

    wohoho erotic n well done..

  4. June 9, 2010 2:10 pm

    you sir…are fantastic

  5. June 9, 2010 7:40 pm

    That’s a naughty last line.
    But hell, what’s poetry for.
    Great job

  6. soulintention: signed .............bkm permalink
    June 9, 2010 8:19 pm

    very nicely said Tim, beautiful thoughts placed into beautiful words…..bkm

  7. June 9, 2010 10:17 pm

    short and sweet – i love its – so much said in so little

  8. Seth permalink
    June 10, 2010 6:02 am

    Nice, short & sweet

  9. June 10, 2010 6:56 am

    brilliant is the word wen i read this 🙂
    simply marvelous 😀

    im here from Jingle’s Rally
    you can view my poem at
    http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/06/10/thursday-poets-rally-pain-reprise/

  10. June 10, 2010 8:17 am

    Sexy words. Its nice to see poetry about a women.

  11. June 10, 2010 9:22 am

    it is steamy here =) i love your poem!

  12. June 10, 2010 10:50 am

    very nice and I just fainted…BRAVO, Tim…
    HOT!
    mine is here
    Have you a rocking week!
    hugs
    shakira

  13. Shaky permalink
    June 11, 2010 12:18 pm

    How would like to open a Hallmark greeting card and see those words written?

    I can’t decide if this is written during the afterglow of intercourse or the extended absence away from a lover. I guess that’s the point – I did not consider it erotic like others did, just a nice expression of the wonder of the physicality of love.

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