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Night Pleasures

June 4, 2010

Night Pleasures

Pleasures given and received,
Moistened, flowing, perfection,
Voices crying, enraptured,
Livening the soft night air;
Souls, searching for, and finding,
Sanctifying with pleasure,
Journey’s ending with a sigh.

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6 Comments leave one →
  1. June 5, 2010 9:21 pm

    awesome,
    your poem is compact and precise,
    very enjoyable to read.
    😉

  2. June 6, 2010 4:48 am

    nice…a playful verse…

  3. viola permalink
    June 6, 2010 8:52 am

    Awesome poem. Very short but yet said a lot, I really enjoy reading it.

  4. June 7, 2010 8:51 pm

    Interesting…got me wondering what night pleasure you had in mind when u wrote this one.

  5. June 9, 2010 12:55 pm

    ttp://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/thursday-poets-rally-week-21-the-perfect-poet-award/

    week 21 the perfect poet award reminder, please nominate one poet for week 22.
    also,
    we require a minimum visits to 18 poets to be done for Rally from week 22 to week 42.
    Thank you in advance!
    😉

  6. dustus permalink
    June 10, 2010 7:36 am

    Great poem… the sigh at the end is perfect for the preceding inspired lines.
    Thanks. Nice work, Tim

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